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Happy Birthday

by Francesco Francavilla

It's the King's Birthday! All hail the King baby.

Dialogue and Page

Dialoging a script can be a real ballbuster at times. But there is that rare occasion when it happens organically. Almost like you are those characters.

This bit of dialogue is one of those occasions.

1.1
JJJ: (YELLING!) PARKER!

1.2
PETEY: Yeah!?

1.3
JJJ: What took you so long?

PETEY: Um, traffic?

JJJ: Very funny.

JJJ: (Contd) You know what I hate more than a comedian?

1.4
PETEY: Breath mints?

art by joe simmons - stupendodog.blogspot.com/